POO53665 play cluster

[geoff]

work sample hi lorina
i have put this in my work sample could you please tell me if on right track
the seeting is outdoors their is atrough with coloured water
childs work
i have wrote conah began to explore the contents in the trough which had green water in with silver paint swirled through to make the surface marble. Conah could tell me what the colours were in the trough .He said green mel . I replied thats right conah .conah then said silver look it s going around in the water .I replied it looks like marble .Conah discovered small glass beads as he moved his hands through the water look mel iv found some beads he gathered the beads with both hands placed in the groves one by one as conah placed in groves he counted the beads look i have 2 beads .Im going to get more and count them he slid the beads along counting them till he got to number 8 . Conah then turned to me and asked whats next i replied 9 he continued on counting to 10 . Whilst conah was playing he could name colours follow instructions learn how to count .
i was just wondering is this right to write for a work sample please help thanks mel

[Lorina]

Are you sure it's a work sample and not a learning story? From what I understand a work sample is actually a piece of child's work (such as a painting, writing piece etc)...

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Lorina