Could I get some feedback on what I've written so far and whether I should add anymore to it?
I am writing to apply for any Assistant Educator positions which you may have available.
Currently I am studying a Diploma of Early Childhood Education and Care with TAFE which is due for completion in November. I also hold a current first aide certificate including anaphylaxis, asthma and resuscitation training as well as a clear working with children check.
My passion for the childcare industry began after my first nephew was born and after spending quality time with him, it made me realise I wanted to have an impact on young children’s lives and help them to grow, learn and gain valuable skills.
In addition to being a much organised student, I am creative and enthusiastic, and sensitive to children’s individual needs. I possess excellent communication skills, both written and verbal.
I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you in order to introduce myself and discuss any suitable positions that may be available. I have enclosed my resume for your consideration.